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Submitted: February 18, 2012
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D3000
Shutter Speed:10/50 second
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Date Taken:Feb 13, 2012, 6:19:48 AM
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Work of Artby ~RawPoetry

Photography / Conceptual

At long last, another installment in the creativity series!

I really think this could be much better and I was planning on re-shooting it this weekend, but one of my days off mysteriously dissapeared, and the other one is now going to be spent at the fire station. So I am posting this.

I will re-shoot it eventually, but who knows when that is going to be.

All constructive criticism is grealty appreciated!

others from my creativity series:

Critique by ~DAVIDHIE89 Feb 19, 2012, 5:45:38 AM

Here is my critique.
Now I am no pro or anything I'm just stating what I think. So lets get started.

Overall the image looks fabulous, the golden frame looks beautiful and the colourful lights in the frame makes it appear as though I am looking through another world or a door to a place that is pleasant and lighted up. You can see the difference between the darkness outside of the frame and the lit up world in the frame. The whole picture is like a mysterious world of darkness and light.

Although it is a very nice picture I think the dark sections outside of the frame looks too plain. There is no shape or colour, it's just plain black (except for the hint of light on the right of the frame). You might as well crop this image to fit just this golden frame. I think there should be hints of shapes or colour to give this picture more dimension instead of a flat black background.

Also a small matter, it would be better if the frame was sharper, unless the upload quality effected your image.

Well that is what I think. Hope I'm not being unfair.

What do you think?

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