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confessions of a girl in debtIt's almost one in the morning
and I have to work tomorrow.

But I just can't sleep.
I'm too busy writing
and searching for
ways to save the earth
and pretending to be
Billy Joel.

It's almost one in the morning,
and I'm in debt again.
I wish I had the time to be Billy Joel,
but I have to work
so I can get out of debt
and still have enough money left over
to paint my car bright green,
and enough time
to save the earth.

It's almost one in the morning
and I'm on stage,
my feet moving independently
of my body.
Or I'm in the audience,
not caring who sees
how bad of a dancer I am.
Or I'm wherever the hell
I want to be;
a

The ocean at my doorstepThe ocean at my doorstep grows;
water rises, hours fall,
soon longing shall be all I know.

Grey waters have no place to go
but through my doors and down my halls.
The ocean at my doorstep grows.

What I've lost, I cannot know
but hang in frames upon my walls.
Soon longing shall be all I know.

Remember days from long ago;
or were they dreams? I can't recall.
The ocean at my doorstep grows.

Long abandoned, summer's glow
has left me in decaying fall.
Soon longing shall be all I know.

Step from my porch, immerse my toes,
up my legs, grey water crawls.
The ocean at my doorstep grows,
soon longing shall be all I know.

Curtainless WindowsI hate curtainless windows.

Whenever the glass is bare,
I feel if I should look
from my distractions
I'd find him there,
behind that transparent barrier,
leering into my
not-so-secret world.

I hate curtainless windows.
In every crack between the blinds,
I feel I may glance outside
and see his figure,
silhoutted against the streetlights
in the rainsoaked night.

I hate curtainless windows.

But sometimes,
even within the
safety of my curtains,
I feel no privacy.

In every word I write,
he hides behind the ink,
woven within each penstroke,
filling every empty space,
reminding me of how empty
I really am;

and how much I ha

Masterpiece Sunlight paints water
acrylic blue, rippled red,
life in every stroke.

It made her happyWhen they first met,
she made sure he spoke first;
made sure he broke that
delicate glass barrier
between lovelorn strangers and
'hello.'
Words held behind her teeth,
expectant lips poised,
but waited to speak,
because it's un-ladylike
to make the first move.

So he did.
It didn't make a difference,
but it made her happy.

When they went out,
she asked him to wear
his nicest black silk shirt
and his nicest
dry-clean-only pants
so if strangers' wandering eyes
fell upon him, he wouldn't leave
a bad impression.

So he did.
It didn't make a difference,
but it made her happy.

When they caressed,
she asked him to hold her

Indifferent StillUnrefined, the sky runs free;
flawless in this noiseless night.
On rippled waters, shown the gleam
of solemn moon reflected bright;
of shadowed blue and star-stained white
that's grown so dim it cannot fill
the empty spaces, starved for light.
We stand, we watch, indifferent still.

Forever runs the mountain stream
whose waters reach the sea in plight.
She cries, if only she could scream,
then we may hear of lost delight,
of sufferings left out of sight,
of how she's choked against her will
though she fights back with all her might.
We stand, we watch, indifferent still.

That noiseless night was crystalline,
but crimson did th

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Miracleby ~RawPoetry

Photography / Macro / Nature

From now on, I'm just going to name my deviations after whatever song I happen to be listening to at the time that I upload them. Today it's 'Miracle' by Michael Tolcher, who is the bomb diggity.

One of these days I'm actually going to put effort into things again. I tried to get up early and go practice landscapes at sunrise but... yeah... I got up at 11:30. Damn me and my love of sleep.

Anywho, all constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

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Critique by !angelaurie Jan 9, 2012, 11:19:20 AM

I just LOVE this image. My favourite part, is that you zoomed up on it so well that you can see all the details in the leaf and the small hairs (I don't know what else to call it) so well.
I also think that it's wonderful how you see the beautiful colours in the background and it's reflection onto the drop of water.
I think the colours go really great together. The green, blue, white and a little bit of pink. Usually those colours don't go together, but in this beautiful image they do.
It's very creative and I've never seem anything like it before. I like this image very much.

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