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Onward, we wentOnward, we went;
taking the wrong exit
on purpose, just to see
where the winding road
would find us by daylight.
And who would've thought
that daylight would find us
sitting on shingled rooftops
in the freezing cold,
just to get a little bit closer
to the sky.
Our eyes shown reflections of
spaceships
and pirate ships
and space pirates,
and how if we could,
we'd take to the stars and
never go back to work,
without even giving
two weeks notice.

Onward, we went;
breaking from the
tree-lined trail
to find towering highs
and stream-water lows
among the mountainous rocks;
none too high
for our little bodies to conquer.
A
Feel Me BreathingSee me here, just as I was.
See me here, just as I was.
last night and nights before.
last night and nights before.
see me before, nights and nights,
here, just as I was.

See night dying, as it does.
See night dying, as it does.
And I, beneathe it, breathing.
And I, beneathe it, breathing.
See night breathing, as it does;
and I, beneath it, dying.

Feel this musky night divide.
Feel this musky night divide,
and see me caught between.
and see me caught between.
Caught between this musky night;
Feel, see me divide.

See this night, last musky night;
See this night, last musky night;
see me caught beneathe.
See me caught benea
confessions of a girl in debtIt's almost one in the morning
and I have to work tomorrow.

But I just can't sleep.
I'm too busy writing
and searching for
ways to save the earth
and pretending to be
Billy Joel.

It's almost one in the morning,
and I'm in debt again.
I wish I had the time to be Billy Joel,
but I have to work
so I can get out of debt
and still have enough money left over
to paint my car bright green,
and enough time
to save the earth.

It's almost one in the morning
and I'm on stage,
my feet moving independently
of my body.
Or I'm in the audience,
not caring who sees
how bad of a dancer I am.
Or I'm wherever the hell
I want to be;
a

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I have scratched my head over this for a while and just can't decide how to improve it.. I think it's the composition that bugs me, but I just can't put my finger on what it is.

So I'd love to hear any constructive criticism you may have to offer! :dummy:

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what.... WHAT?! A Daily Deviation? Are you serious?! I am so incredibly not worthy! :faint:

I seriously feel like I have enough excitement in me right now to backflip from here to mexico. (which is a very long way, in case you were wondering.)

Thank you thank you THANK YOU to everyone who has commment, faved and viewed! I am going to do everything within my ability to thank all of you, but I will probably run out of steam at some point, so THANK YOU! :iconexcitedlaplz:
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Mood: Love ~melencholy-spirit Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for telling me! It really helps!!!
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Mood: Love ~fairhaired-cutey May 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice =D
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Mood: Love *mayat-s Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
    lovely :heart:
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Mood: Love ~Chips13 Apr 24, 2012
I like it!
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Mood: Love !LeannFigs1234 Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful! :)
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Mood: Love ~BaziKotek Apr 24, 2012
Awww..lovely!!!!!
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Mood: Love ~Makaylafashion Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Amazing!!
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Mood: Love ~PandoraLewis Apr 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely Photo!
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Mood: Love *Jociii Apr 24, 2012
Soo cool. Like stars are closing the book. ^^
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Mood: Love ~akum3tsu Apr 24, 2012
wow dude gj love it
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