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April 23, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3000
Shutter Speed
10/250 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
60 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 22, 2012, 9:12:11 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
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Imagine by RawPoetry Imagine by RawPoetry
I have scratched my head over this for a while and just can't decide how to improve it.. I think it's the composition that bugs me, but I just can't put my finger on what it is.

So I'd love to hear any constructive criticism you may have to offer! :dummy:

other conceptual:

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EDIT:

what.... WHAT?! A Daily Deviation? Are you serious?! I am so incredibly not worthy! :faint:

I seriously feel like I have enough excitement in me right now to backflip from here to mexico. (which is a very long way, in case you were wondering.)

Thank you thank you THANK YOU to everyone who has commment, faved and viewed! I am going to do everything within my ability to thank all of you, but I will probably run out of steam at some point, so THANK YOU! :iconexcitedlaplz:
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Given 2012-04-24
Imagine by *RawPoetry ( Suggested by VisualPoems and Featured by DemonMathiel )
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wow!!!! that nice!!!
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Dipliner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured here [link] :heart:
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RawPoetry Feb 4, 2013   Photographer
aaawh thank you so much for including me in such a lovely feature! :love:
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RawPoetry Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
thanks so much! :happybounce:
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CoronaChrome Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is such an amazing, optimistic and happy photo! I was kind of a lonely kid that never quite fit in and books offered me a great way to expand my knowledge.

I still don't fit in, but as an adult, that's now part of my charm!

This is a definite fave. Your photos are so bright and vibrant.

I'd be interested to know what it is that bothers you about it when you figure it out.

You know what bothers me? The fingerprints on the stars! Wear gloves! :D
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RawPoetry Oct 22, 2012   Photographer
Why thank you, glad you like it! :love:
So glad you never conformed, not fitting in is a very admirable trait! :D
Haha I know I know, one of those little details that I missed until I had already finished the shoot! :faint:

Thanks again, and sorry for how late this reply is! :faint:
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CoronaChrome Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Not at all...we all have lives outside of dA! I enjoy hearing from you whenever you have time.
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grant-weir Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how do i fav??
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CoronaChrome Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Green button in the upper RH corner!
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