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I have scratched my head over this for a while and just can't decide how to improve it.. I think it's the composition that bugs me, but I just can't put my finger on what it is.

So I'd love to hear any constructive criticism you may have to offer! :dummy:

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EDIT:

what.... WHAT?! A Daily Deviation? Are you serious?! I am so incredibly not worthy! :faint:

I seriously feel like I have enough excitement in me right now to backflip from here to mexico. (which is a very long way, in case you were wondering.)

Thank you thank you THANK YOU to everyone who has commment, faved and viewed! I am going to do everything within my ability to thank all of you, but I will probably run out of steam at some point, so THANK YOU! :iconexcitedlaplz:
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Given 2012-04-24
Imagine by *RawPoetry ( Suggested by VisualPoems and Featured by DemonMathiel )
:icondisneygirl1995:
disneygirl1995 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job, this is really pretty :)
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014   Photographer
Thank you, I am very glad that you like it! :)
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:iconrandamu-chan:
Randamu-Chan Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute :)
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014   Photographer
Thanks! :)
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:iconrandamu-chan:
Randamu-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!:heart:
God bless
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:icongildalily:
gildalily Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
I love these. Thank your for sharing your talent.
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014   Photographer
Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you like my work! :)
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:iconlanlia:
Lanlia Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
wow!!!! that nice!!!
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:icondipliner:
Dipliner Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured here [link] :heart:
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013   Photographer
aaawh thank you so much for including me in such a lovely feature! :love:
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:iconyoloxl:
yoloXl Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
wowww
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
thanks so much! :happybounce:
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:iconcoronachrome:
CoronaChrome Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is such an amazing, optimistic and happy photo! I was kind of a lonely kid that never quite fit in and books offered me a great way to expand my knowledge.

I still don't fit in, but as an adult, that's now part of my charm!

This is a definite fave. Your photos are so bright and vibrant.

I'd be interested to know what it is that bothers you about it when you figure it out.

You know what bothers me? The fingerprints on the stars! Wear gloves! :D
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012   Photographer
Why thank you, glad you like it! :love:
So glad you never conformed, not fitting in is a very admirable trait! :D
Haha I know I know, one of those little details that I missed until I had already finished the shoot! :faint:

Thanks again, and sorry for how late this reply is! :faint:
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:iconcoronachrome:
CoronaChrome Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Not at all...we all have lives outside of dA! I enjoy hearing from you whenever you have time.
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:icongrant-weir:
grant-weir Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how do i fav??
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:iconcoronachrome:
CoronaChrome Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Green button in the upper RH corner!
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:iconendo24:
endo24 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
:excited: I know! I know!!! (happy little puppy wanting attention- *Style*):giggle:
I know what is missing to make this so freaking cool!
You need a larger star - Larger than all the others. To be you focal point and it needs to be placed on the binding. So it looks like a shooting star with the pages streaming out behind it!!! OH, and leave the other smaller stars in... JUST add the largest star to the binding. Oooooo! And I just thought of this- angle the shot so the star is shooting up! Please try it!!! :twocents:
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012   Photographer
that is a very neat idea! I will have to try it once I get a hold of some more of these stars... and some free time. :XD:
Thanks so much for your comment! :D
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:iconlittlebluewildfire:
littlebluewildfire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
congratz:)
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012   Photographer
thank you so much! :iconnewglomp:
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:iconmelencholy-spirit:
melencholy-spirit Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great photo!
how do you get the pages open like that?
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012   Photographer
thank you! :love:
I got the pages open by putting clothespins inbetween them. :)
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:iconmelencholy-spirit:
melencholy-spirit Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for telling me! It really helps!!!
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:iconallisonwashko:
allisonwashko Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello! This photo has been featured in my weekly Friday Feature. Thank you for the wonderful photo & keep up the great work! ♥
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 25, 2012   Photographer
too kind of you, thank you so much! I truly appreciated it! :love::heart:
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:iconallisonwashko:
allisonwashko Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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:iconfairhaired-cutey:
fairhaired-cutey Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice =D
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 7, 2012   Photographer
thanks so much! :happybounce:
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:iconpqphotography:
pqphotography Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured in my journal [link] :love:
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 7, 2012   Photographer
aw thank you! I really appreciate it! :tighthug:
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:iconpqphotography:
pqphotography Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure :tighthug:
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:iconkelpgull:
KelpGull Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well deserved! I figured it'd happen sooner or later ;D
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 7, 2012   Photographer
hehe well thank you!
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:iconmadowee11:
madowee11 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
great!so great!
i'm waiting for your new works!
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 7, 2012   Photographer
thanks so much, very glad you like it!
hehe I will try not to dissapoint! :dummy:
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:iconmayat-s:
mayat-s Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
    lovely :heart:
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 2, 2012   Photographer
thank you very much! :love:
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:iconabyss-valkyrie:
Abyss-Valkyrie Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mmmm!WOOOW!!
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner May 2, 2012   Photographer
hehe I'll take that as a compliment! Thank you! :love:
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:icontimeraider:
timeraider Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is gorgeous! Magical, really.
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012   Photographer
Thank you very much! :)
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:iconmartywitch:
MartyWitch Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This picture is really beautiful. I love the colours, the stars, the book; Just everything! Well done! :XD:
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012   Photographer
thank you, I am so very glad that you like it! :tighthug:
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:iconpowerfulstardust:
PowerfulStardust Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
Awww...your idea is sooooo incredibly magic !!! :star:

P.S. i am not good in making critiques....i saw it, loved it and faved!
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012   Photographer
aww well thank you! I am so glad that you like it! :love:
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:iconpowerfulstardust:
PowerfulStardust Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
You are very welcome! <3
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
A lovely piece. Wonderful job.
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:iconrawpoetry:
RawPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012   Photographer
thanks so very much! :meow:
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
You're welcome. :aww:
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